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Never before
have I opened this door
Never before have I known
for myself to have felt so alone
Never before
have I felt this at the core
To feel the anger, the sadness
This unexplainable madness
That floods my mind
I'm losing time
Never before
have my tears so heavily poured
and made this so hard to endure
I'm not sure if I can take much more
my heart and soul are torn
It's a pain I cant ignore
Never before could I believe
That I could stop the need
Never before could I understand
That now I can.
©2008-2009 ~sumomo16anime
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i like the flow to it

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:icongothiquehobbit:
Whoo! I the emotion conveyed in this, it's very... indescribable. Bitterness, maybe? Mixture of sadness and anger, perhaps? I don't know. Either way, it's a good poem. It has a solid, somber tone, and the rhythm is rather good. :) Great job!

--
People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
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We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
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When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:iconsumomo16anime:
Thanks it help to hear those things it builds confidence in me to keep writing more
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:icongothiquehobbit:
You're welcome. Glad to help. ^_^

--
People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
---
We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
---
When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran

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